My mom, sister Liz, and I after the Giants won Superbowl XLII
Vocabulary-
enormous-adjective-exceeding the common size, extent, etc.; huge
professional-adjective-undertaken or engaged in as a means of livelihood or for gain
specifically-adjective-specified, precise, or particular
memorabilia-noun-mementos; souvenirs
exhilarating-verb-to enliven; invigorate; stimulate
whirlwind-adjective-as in speed or forceelement-
element-noun-a natural habitat, sphere of activity, environment
glorifying-verb-to cause to be or treat as being more splendid, excellent, etc., than would normally be remarkable-adjective-notably or conspicuously unusual; extraordinary
professional-adjective-undertaken or engaged in as a means of livelihood or for gain
specifically-adjective-specified, precise, or particular
memorabilia-noun-mementos; souvenirs
exhilarating-verb-to enliven; invigorate; stimulate
whirlwind-adjective-as in speed or forceelement-
element-noun-a natural habitat, sphere of activity, environment
glorifying-verb-to cause to be or treat as being more splendid, excellent, etc., than would normally be remarkable-adjective-notably or conspicuously unusual; extraordinary
Exercise-I wrote about one of my favorite things to do-watch the New York Giants play football. Write about your favorite sport, team, or activity. What do you like most about it? What kinds of feelings do you have when you watch or actually take part in this activity?
Grammar Point-Descriptive Writing Use
By describing the situation rather than simply stating a few facts, you can begin to visualize the circumstances much better. This leaves a little less to the imagination and by doing so, leads your readers closer towards your actual experience versus letting them jump to their own conclusions and possibly not getting the picture you're trying to paint. An action that only took a second in real time will seem to take three minutes by breaking down the feelings, smells, and visuals of that act. And by slowing it down and really describing every minute detail, your readers will begin to put themselves in your shoes.
By describing the situation rather than simply stating a few facts, you can begin to visualize the circumstances much better. This leaves a little less to the imagination and by doing so, leads your readers closer towards your actual experience versus letting them jump to their own conclusions and possibly not getting the picture you're trying to paint. An action that only took a second in real time will seem to take three minutes by breaking down the feelings, smells, and visuals of that act. And by slowing it down and really describing every minute detail, your readers will begin to put themselves in your shoes.
Two superbowls????? Thats so awesome! It must have been an amazing experience, especially because your team (Giants) won both of the superbowls you attended.
ReplyDeleteI am a jets fan though.